Happy Friday! Last Friday, my Poetry Friday friend Linda shared an etheree – a particular poetic form, where the first line has one syllable, the next line two and so on, all the way to ten. I had seen this form before but not played with it, but Linda’s lovely poem about her cat (you can see it here) inspired me to give it a go.
Another thing I’ve been inspired by this past year, is my beach visits. I have always found the beach restful and inspiring in equal measure, and in Covid times, those visits have taken on extra meaning. So, when I decided to write an etheree and needed a single syllable word to begin with, there was only once choice. Here is what I came up with:
My Place

Beach
each day
different
one day calm, still
the next, crashing waves
one day leaping dolphins
next an exuberant seal
new sights, delights await each time
I visit; but one thing stays the same:
that beach never fails to make me wonder.
When I’d finished, I decided I’d like to also try my hand a reverse etheree – which starts with ten syllables and works back to one. I instantly wondered if I could take that last line of my first etheree and make it the first line of my reverse. You can see I tweaked the first word, but here’s what came out:
Take Away
The beach never fails to make me wonder:
new sights and sounds on every visit
a seal, a dolphin, screeching gulls
gambolling dogs, chasing waves
that gently roll or else
loudly crash and bash.
So much to take

away when
home time
comes.
And then, just when I thought I was finished, I realised that I’d left something out – the people who share the beach with me. Nearly every day I see my beach-friend Dave, walking his dog Mitch, and there are other regulars – some I know by name, some I know by sight, and some people I see there just once. And, of course, especially in the last year, I have loved sharing my beach through photos and videos shared here on my website and through social media, with people far and wide. It’s been a real privilege to share what I see, and to hear from people who have enjoyed those glimpses. So, one more etheree, again begun with the last line of the one before
Sharing
Come
with me
and walk on
sandy shores and
see what I can see
hear what I am hearing
even if you are with me
only through a camera lens.
Technology bringing you along
makes my own experience much richer.
Thanks Linda for inspiring me to try this form. I know I’ll be using it more – and sharing it in the classroom, too.
Thanks too to Molly, who will be hosting the Poetry Friday Roundup. I can’t wait to see what new inspiration I collect from my fellow poets this week.








Pablo Neruda: Poet of the People
novel for the year, and also the second by Herrick. What a treat. I’ve read this one before – several times – but it continues to please. With topics including first love, teen hormones and the grief of an absent parent, it’s no surprise that this book is both poignant and funny. Hard to believe it was first published 15 years ago, but not hard to believe it is still in print.
Herrick book of the year, and another reread, for a database project I’m working on with the Australian Centre for Children’s Literature (more on this soon). Joan is navigating high school, first love, and the breakdown of his parents’ marriage. His best mate Manx is there at his side, though he has problems of his own. As with most of Herrick’s work, this is humorous as well as touching.
UK, 2019). This debut written collection by a UK spoken-word poet is suitable for teens and adults, and explores complex topics. I especially connected with poems about writing, and being willing to write, as well as those about grief.
(Audible, 2020). This one was a free download from Audible, and not what I’d normally choose for myself – which is why I listened to it. It’s good to try new things, and at less than three hours listening time, this was a quick read, telling the story of a marriage in trouble after the narrator, Cam, realises his wife has been having an affair. Contemporary fiction, with enough twists and turns to keep it moving, and an interesting look at marriage and family.
from Audible (they offer a free title each month, and I have found this a good way to read different genres). This is the second in a detective series, featuring detectives Jackman & Evans, but, as with other similar series, stands alone. The case they are working , ostensibly searching for two missing girls, becomes really unsettling, but is well woven. I mainly listen to audio books when driving, but this one absorbed me enough that I had to keep listening when at home.
Christmas gift from my wise big sister, Mary, who felt it was just the kind of book we needed in these times. And she was right. Bill Bailey is a comedian and a clever person, and the book is not a ‘how to be happy’ books, but perhaps a reminder that happiness is never permanent, and can be found in moments. It also led to me writing a poem about happiness, which I posted 