
Poetic Imagery
By Kathryn Apel
Shaping a poem
the body builder
pumps
flexes
tones and
tautens
as
snip
snap
snip –
the gardener
prunes and shapes
and
whoosh!
the very
clumsy clown
colours the sky
with brightly bobbing
balloons of
thought
I often think that poets paint pictures with words, but when I’m writing poetry, I get three distinct visual images – and they’re all of me! Let me put you in the picture…
Okay – so this is a bit of a joke, because in reality I can’t lift more than a bar of chocolate. BUT – The Body Builder tones up by pumping iron. As a writer, I tone up by pumping poetry. Composing poetry flexes creativity. It hones vocabulary. It pinpoints weaknesses and forces me to focus on specific ‘muscles’. The more poetry I write, the greater my control of my writing muscles – of words.
a topiary artiste, intent on pruning and shaping; looking at the bigger picture and trimming it into a recognisable form. There is a certain ruthlessness in laying bare a thing of beauty. Poetry is a lot like a topiary tree – each word carefully placed to create a sharp, clear image. Excess words snipped away. There is no room for clutter. Each word must earn its place.
Thirdly, I see myself as The Clumsy Clown clutching fistfuls of colourful helium balloons… but can she keep them all in her grasp? Poetry has a way of releasing thoughts to, float, fly, drift and swirl like a bunch of brightly bobbing balloons.
When writing poetry, I am carried away by my imagination…
Congratulations Sally, on the release of your second verse novel. ‘Pearl Verses the World’ was stunning. I know that ‘Toppling’ will be another rich, warm story to touch the heart. Hugs to you! And thankyou for letting me share your blog space.
Thanks, Kat. I feel inspired to go pump some iron now 🙂
Sally, thanks for letting me share your blog. It's been a lot of fun. All this talk about poetry makes me want to pick up the pen and WRITE!
Trust that your month of March is Toppling!
Kat
Poetry warms you up and inspires you, Book Chook. It makes you want to play more.
I enjoyed your analogies too Kat. I love the idea of using poetry as a warm up to other kinds of writing.
Just one more thing we share, Dee – besides a quirky sense of humour and a love of chocolate!
I think that's why I love 'playing' with words. Because it gives you creativity in totally unexpected ways.
Thanks Sally and Kat for sharing this very visual image of poetry. Of course being a chocoholic, I enjoyed the weight lifting analogy. But I particularly related to the way that you said poetry allows your thoughts to float and swirl. I think it's that sort of freedom that makes writing great – going beyond the obvious and the immediate – taking your creativity to a whole new level.
Hi Lorraine, Yes – lots of lovely writing time. I've been working on my verse novel today – a form you know very well!
Thanks, Claire.
Don't forget the chocolate bar, Katrina!
Glad you could relate, Jennifer.
🙂
Very individual analogies, vivid images, well put Kat! :))
Yay! That's my kind of exercise and gardening!
nice description Kat!
Claire
Kat, loved your analogies- never thought of referring to poetry like that- love the pic of you and balloons- hope you're still getting time to write. Lorraine