It’s been over a month since my last Poetry Friday offering and, in that post I was complaining about the cold, and looking for reasons to LIKE winter.
Fast forward to today, and its cold and wet and wintry – and, you guessed it, I am still struggling to find good things about winter.
But, I do have a pair of haiku that I wrote about being cold – and trying to flip between the downsides of being cold and the upsides. Here it is:
Cold
Caught in the rain
Burning of frostbitten toes
Blades of wintry wind
A plunge in cold pool
Bubbling fizzing lemonade
Shivering lemonade.
(Copyright Sally Murphy)
Not sure this really counts as flipping the bad to the good – because I seem to be arguing that being cold is winter in bad, but being cold in summer is good. Can you tell I’m a summer person?
But, because I’m a contrary kind of person, I also have a pair of haiku about the pros and cons of being hot.
Hot
Sweat-drenched smelly socks
Suffocating in-school days
Unrelenting sun
Thawing spring sunshine
Steam rising from chocolate drink
Toasty slipper toes.
(Copyright Sally Murphy)
And you can see that I found the good things about being hot right in the midst of winter.
Incidentally, these ‘opposite haikus’ (as I call them) appeared in my book for teachers last year, and were written quite some time before that. It was only when I typed them up for this blog post that I noticed something in the
syllable counts. If I’m sticking to a 5/7/5 syllable count for each haiku (and yes, I do know that true haiku do not have to adhere strictly to this count) – then the line about the chocolate drink is questionable. It depends on pronunciation – the dictionary tells me that it definitely has 3 syllables – choc-o-late – but I confess, when Is ay it it definitely comes out with only two – chock – let – which is how it is that I have never noticed this in my own poem before.
Does it matter? Probably not – although now that I’ve noticed it, it annoys me, because I’m a stickler for rules.
But being distracted by syllable counts has taken my mind of being cold. So that’s gotta be good thing, right?
I’m off to make a hot chocolate and browse the rest of the Poetry Friday posts. They always warm my heart. The Roundup is hosted by Elisabeth – you should check it out 🙂

All in the Blue Unclouded Weather
Whisper on the Wind
Seree’s Story
Girl from the Sea,
Ninni Yabini
How to Tackle Your Dreams
Old Fellow
Impossible Music
Another Holiday for the Prince
Matthew Flinders’ Cat,
A Kiss From Mr Fitzgerald
Love Stories

What Snail Knows
Like Pickle Juice on a Cookie
10.10 Poetry Anthology
Winnie-the-Pooh
Birdie
When We Were Very Young
The Ghost Locket
Tasmanian Devil
Eleanor, Elizabeth
Red
Spi-ku: A Clutter of Short verse on Eight Legs
Blubber
At the Pond,
The Black Flamingo
Roxy
Finding Jupiter,
Came Back to Show You I Could Fly
His Last Bow
The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo
Ten Steps to Nanette
Let Go
Fathoms: The World in the Whale