Earlier in the year, I was walking along a city street with my family when my eyes were drawn to a flash of gold in the otherwise bare branches of a tree ahead. I knew instantly, when I realised it was a lone leaf, that I had to record it. When I looked for the best angle I realised that the windows of the building behind amplified the bare tree, making that gold really pop out. Snap, the photo was taken.
But later, when I tried to write a poem to match the photo, I drew a blank. Writing has been slow for me this year, and I just could not find the words to match the image. So, the phot0 sat on my computer and my phone, waiting.
Then, last Friday, the wonderful Carol Varsalona, asked if I had anything to contribute to her Abundant Autumn Gallery and I remembered my photo. I knew it was time! The photo came out and over the next few days, I started playing with ideas. I ended up with not one, but three possible poems for my image.
First this :
Rare treasure
Last leaf
Reflects, resplendent.
Then this:
Last leaf reflects
Saying to herself
‘I look grand in gold’.
But, the one I finally settled on was this:
Golden dancer
Pauses, anticipating
one final pirouette.
I’m hoping it captures that image I have (though didn’t get to see) of that leaf finally letting go and spiraling down to the ground.
Sometimes, a poem doesn’t come until it’s ready . You can’t force it – you have to leave it leaf it alone until it’s ready. Thanks for helping it along though, Carol.
For more Poetry Friday goodness, pop over to see the Roundup, hosted by Janice at Salt City Verse.