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Poetry Friday: Crossing Roads

October 19, 2018 by Sally 21 Comments

It’s kind of ironic that I have come to Hanoi to write, and yet struggle to find time to write a regular blog post.  But rest assured, although I have been quiet here, words have been written, and ideas are percolating, and adventures which will, one way or another, make their way into my future writings, are being had.   Many of those adventures seem to involve traffic, a topic which seems to keep coming up in my writing and in my conversations.

Yesterday, talking with some lovely new friends about overcoming fears and taking risks, I found myself using an analogy, comparing the doubt we have about taking risks to  the moments before crossing a busy Hanoi road. The moments when we wonder if the traffic will ever clear enough, and if we should risk it or just go back where we came from. And I talked about how, once you do take that first step, a pathway kind of appears – not a straight line but an awareness of the gaps. And how good it feels to get to the other side. As I said this, my friends nodded in agreement, and I knew I had to try to put all that into a poem.  Before I show you what I came up with, here is a glimpse of the kind of road I mean. This footage was taken just after I had crossed both of the roads at a busy intersection  (to end up diagonal from my starting point). It is actually an intersection with traffic lights and even walk signals  but  red lights and little green men do NOT mean the same thing here as they do elsewhere. And the most dangerous part is often on the pavement, because the motorbikes leave the road, cut the corner on the footpath, then duck back onto the road.  You might get some sense of what I mean in the video.

The best part is – this is not the busiest road I have crossed.

Anyway, here’s my attempt to craft my analogy into a poem.

Crossings

 

Crossing a Hanoi road

is just a metaphor for life.

You stand poised on the edge

and you see

all the danger

the risks

the hazards

and you wonder if it’s safer

to just stay where you are.

But then you remember your goal

and you know

you can only do it

by leaving your safe spot.

So you assess the risks

watch for patterns

and gaps

and opportunities

and finally

take that first step.

There is no straight line.

There are noises

and smells

and moments of sheer terror

and you have to adjust your course

as you go

but when you get there

you smile

glad to be alive.

(Poem copyright Sally Murphy, 2018)

Today’s Poetry Friday Roundup is hosted by Brenda at Friendly Fairytales. Head over there to see links to loads of other poetry goodness.  Have a good week – and watch out for motorbikes!


PS. This post, and my visit to Hanoi, are made possible by the amazing Asialink Arts Program, and with the funding support of the the Western Australian Government through the  Department of Local Government, Sport and Cultural Industries.

Filed Under: Asialink, Poetry Tagged With: asialink, crossing roads, hanoi, poems, poetry

Comments

  1. Kay Jernigan McGriff says

    October 24, 2018 at 8:15 am

    Oh my, I take it that traffic laws are just the merest of suggestions. I love how your metaphor came together in your poem. So much of the “rules” of life are just suggestions, too, and we have to be brave enough to take the first steps and keep on going.

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  2. Mary Lee says

    October 22, 2018 at 6:52 pm

    Wow. Thanks for the video. I think no matter how you tried to describe that scene with words, it would have fallen short. That’s just…amazing! I can’t imagine that level of chaos being the norm! I guess you’d get used to it and adapt. Your poem contains big truths for life.

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  3. Michelle Kogan says

    October 20, 2018 at 11:53 am

    Wow Sally, I like Irene’s comment above that it’s “more dangerous to stand still” just might be. Brava for mastering these streets and weaving the experience into poems that parallel life.

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  4. Buffy Silverman says

    October 20, 2018 at 9:18 am

    I’m glad I don’t have to deal with such traffic in my life!! But happy that your traffic inspired a terrific poem.

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    • Sally says

      October 20, 2018 at 9:41 am

      Thanks Buffy. I am glad that this traffic is a novelty to me and not my forever reality.

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  5. JoAnn Early Macken says

    October 20, 2018 at 1:52 am

    That video is terrifying! I love what you made of it, especially “you wonder if it’s safer / to just stay where you are. / But then you remember your goal / and you know / you can only do it / by leaving your safe spot.” Yes, what a fitting metaphor for moving through life. I love the thought that a path appears when you need one.

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    • Sally says

      October 20, 2018 at 9:00 am

      Thanks JoAnn. I have to cross one such road to get breakfast every day and there have been days when I’ve wondered how much I need breakfast! But yes, paths open every time.

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  6. Carol Varsalona says

    October 20, 2018 at 1:35 am

    Sally, before seeing the video I lifted this line from your text: “once you do take that first step, a pathway kind of appears – not a straight line but an awareness of the gaps.” That rang true about life. Then, I saw your video and I thought, “I would not be able to handle driving in Hanoi.” On the other hand, How do we move forward if we are blocked by our fears? Thanks for the words to live by poem.

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    • Sally says

      October 20, 2018 at 8:57 am

      Thanks Carol. I have to admit I don’t think I could drive here either. on foot I have some sense of being in control. But I guess if I lived here longer I would take that next step and drive, because it would open up places and options.

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  7. jama says

    October 19, 2018 at 11:50 pm

    Crossing that busy road is a great metaphor for life in general. Zig Zag indeed! Enjoying all your Hanoi adventures, Sally.

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    • Sally says

      October 20, 2018 at 8:55 am

      Thanks Jama. I am so glad to be able to share my adventures this way.

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  8. Tabatha says

    October 19, 2018 at 10:12 pm

    That’s not the busiest road you have crossed??!!
    I guess the thing about life’s road is that you may THINK you see what’s coming, but something new can pop up!

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    • Sally says

      October 20, 2018 at 8:55 am

      Sp true Tabatha. And as I wrote this poem I crossed my fingers that my next post isn’t about the day I got hit by a bus, lol.

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  9. Irene Latham says

    October 19, 2018 at 9:37 pm

    There is no straight line. Indeed! What chaos, and what bravery… more dangerous to stand still, methinks, in Hanoi, and in life! xo

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    • Sally says

      October 20, 2018 at 8:54 am

      Thanks Irene. It’s funny how many people have told me this past few months that I am brave. And I balked at that descriptor, because I know how I feel inside, and it isn’t always what I would call brave. But then I realise we are all brave just to take any steps at all! And courage is many different things.

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  10. Linda Baie says

    October 19, 2018 at 12:19 pm

    I am so glad you shared the video, and love your intro as well as that ‘zig-zag’ of the poem, “an awareness of the gaps” makes wonderful sense to me. My own mantra is to just take that first step, and it feels as if that’s what one must do, here, in that real traffic or life’s. This should turn into a picture book, Sally!

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    • Sally says

      October 19, 2018 at 5:18 pm

      High praise Linda. Thank you. The first step is always the hardest one, I find.

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  11. Linda Mitchell says

    October 19, 2018 at 9:18 am

    My goodness, you are such an adventurer! Can I travel with you sometime? You seem to like the foods I like and the adventure I like AND writing poetry. LOL. Seriously, I’m so enjoying the joy that comes across in your travels. This poem is one that I think you will look over in a decade or so and the memories of sheer terror and adjusting course will just flood back.

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    • Sally says

      October 19, 2018 at 9:45 am

      Oh Linda I would love to travel with you! This whole adventure is one I will look back on – almost every day I have asked myself ‘what am I doing here!’ but only in odd moments because the rest of the time I am going woooooow.

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  12. Jane @ Raincity Librarian says

    October 19, 2018 at 9:16 am

    I feel like I am in the middle of the street at the moment, with cars and motorbikes whizzing around me – I just have to keep my eye on the other side of the street, because I’ll get there in the end!

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    • Sally says

      October 19, 2018 at 9:43 am

      You will Jane, you will!

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