Day four of my blog tour and today I’ll be visiting Persnickety Snark‘s blog – hope to see you there.
Thanks so much to everyone who called in yesterday and participated in the inaugural verse-off. If you missed out, and are wondering what a verse-off might be, see yesterday’s post.
The results are in – and today I’m delighted to share with you the responses to yesterday’s gorgeous photo. So, here goes:
From Dee White:
Necks bared to watching predators,
bask with apparent ambition
fearless heads point forward anticipate together
reflection
synchronised stillness
seep into slow dive
slide beneath the surface
and disappear
just in time.
An Acrostic from Fletcher Apel:
Turtles are interesting
Underwater swimming
Reptiles with shells
Terrapin a terror for pronouncing
Look cute swimming in clear water
Eating fish and shrimp
Sunning themselves.
From Kathryn Apel:
necks craned
mute
turtles gaze
at untapped depths
of blue skies
Branyon Apel wrote:
shells on a branch
above water
sunning
Janeen Brian contributed:
‘Hey Charlie,
ever wondered
why they call this place,
Turtle Point?
Sally Odgers wrote:
T is for terrapins
Climbing from water into sky
The branch their bridge
Between realities
Finn (no link or second name) said:
on the log
looking up
where am I?
Felix Apel (rounding out the whole family’s contribution) said:
A reflection
seen by others
is not as we see
Andromeda Jazmon, from A Wrung Sponge, contributed:
Exposing our necks,
content to be still
dark marks hung
between mirrors of blue.
Waiting to fully
absorb the heat of
stillness;
nothing more.
But you see double;
see an arrow,
see hope or fear or
victory.We are just
turtles on a log.
J.R. Poulter‘s response:
Seamless
Sewn with invisible stitches
Earth and sky
No entry point and nowhere
To exit
We sit
In a line
Biding our time till
Something opens up
And something else
Will mergeā¦.
And Fletcher and Kathryn Apel combined for this one:
Turtles totter on the log
step-by-step
two-by-two
Splash!
Lisa Schroeder, an old critique buddy of mine (hi Lisa) contributed:
Where you go,
I follow.
For without you,
water is just water
and a branch is just a branch.
But when I’m with you,
we swim in a sea of love
and rest on a path of understanding.
If you want to see the rhyming responses to the photo, visit Kathryn Apel’s blog. Incidentally, not only did the Apel family contribute five of the above responses, but the photo, too, was taken by the talented Felix Apel. What a creative family!
Enjoy this verse-off? Wonderful! Then why not come back next week to do it all again with a new photo? We’ll be versing off every Sunday during May – with an extra installment this Friday to celebrate the launch of Kathryn’s picture book This is the Mud.
Sally_Odgers says
!!!!! That was fun.