It’s Poetry Friday but I feel, for me, it’s been poetry week: which is a wonderful thing indeed.
On Monday night I spent a lovely couple of hours in Fremantle at Voicebox, a monthly open mic poetry night. I’ve been hearing about Voicebox for years and planning to get along, especially since I started working back in the city, but this was my first time actually getting there. Very glad I did. There were two guest poets who read from their works: Rajan Sharma, in Australia from the UK to perform at the Fringe festival, and Caitlin Maling, a West Aussie poet who I already very much admired, but who is always a pleasure to hear from. There were also 10 awesome volunteers for the open mic spots, so over the course of the night, we were treated to an incredible range of poets and poetic forms, and topics., as well as opportunities to just chat poetry, and life, with fellow attendees.
Listening to poets who are writing for adults, and chatting poetry was an excellent precursor to the event I spoke at on Wednesday night. My awesome poet friend Rebecca Newman had asked me to be part of an event at the amazing Paperbird Books, talking all things children’s poetry and reading from our work. The event on Monday night had taken my thoughts back to an a question I keep coming back to: what makes a poem ‘for children’ or ‘for adults’? I spent far too much time during my doctoral studies trying to nail down an answer, so I went back again this week to revisit what I ended up writing.
The conclusion I made then, as now, is that while the question can’t be easily answered, a poem is for children either because an adult (poet, publisher, teacher) decides it is, based on their concept of childhood OR it is for children if children engage with it. I like the latter idea better, because it gives the child agency. For myself, when I write poetry I try not to talk TO children , nor even OF children, but AS a child, because that is who I really am. After all, adults and children are one and the same – we are on a continuum. My favourite quote in trying to figure all this out is from Ted Hughes, who labelled writing children’s poetry “a curious occupation…the most curious thing being that we think children need a special kind of poetry”.
SO, Rebecca and I headed to Paperbird on Wednesday night, with a very enthusiastic, friendly audience, who listened to us talk about this curious occupation, and the experiences we have had both crafting poetry, and sharing it with children. We talked about the importance of letting children enjoy poetry – both the reading and the writing, and I suspect I used the word ‘pleasure’ at least a hundred times: pleasure is key when it comes to experiencing poetry. What else did we talk about? The importance of poetry in tough times, the joy of humorous poetry, rhyme, not rhyme… so much! Rebecca recorded our conversation, so we are hoping there might be some snippets to share at some point.
In the meantime, as we discussed our work, we touched on Poetry Tag, the blog we used to run (I guess we still own it – we just kind of faded out of posting). The idea was that we took turns setting the other a handful of words which then had to be incorporated into a poem. I went looking today for one of those poems, which I mentioned during Wednesday night’s chat. I remembered it as a really angry poem. When I found it today I realised it probably wasn’t angry enough, because there are still refugee children being mistreated, just as they were in 2014 when I wrote this poem. Anyway, here is, along with the words Rebecca gave me back then:
SONG
I sing
of a courageous tree
which struggles on
beside the sea
in spite of wind
and waves
and sand
perched
betwixt ocean and land.
I sing
of snail
that battles on
though winter’s rains
are so long gone
and shelters
waiting
in fragile shell.
How long
till rain
he cannot tell.
I sing
of you
embattled child
whose land
and life
have been defiled.
Who seeks new home
new hope
new place
Yet languish now
in no-man-s place.
I sing
to tell the world you’re there.
I sing
to let you know I care.
And like that tree
and like that snail
I sing in hopes
you will prevail.
I sing for you
young refugee
in hopes one day
you will be free.
(Copyright Sally Murphy 2014; 2020)
My conclusions from my week of poetry? We need angry poems. We need to write them and share them and act on them. We also need beautiful poems, hope-filled poems, sad poems, joyful poems, funny poems. Thanks Voicebox, Paper Bird and Rebecca for making this a poetry week for me and others. And thanks to the Poetry Friday community for letting me be part of spreading poetry and its many messages.
Speaking of Poetry Friday – head over to the roundup hosted this week by my fellow Aussie poet, Kat Apel, who is also, coincidentally, sharing a poem she wrote in 2014.
Hope your week is filled with poetry too!
Michelle Kogan says
Moving, heartfelt poem Sally, and I agree we need more of all types of poems! Sounds like a full satisfying week of poetry you filled. I don’t think about if I’m writing for a child or an adult, unless it’s been specified. I also agree with Kat, there’s lots of honey in your poem, thanks!
KAY MCGRIFF says
What a fabulous week of poetry! I would have loved to have heard your talk. Thank you for sharing some of it with us. I’m with you on poetry for children–poetry that children engage with. I know when I taught, but students (8th graders) often introduced me to some of my favorite books and authors–some were “children’s,” some not as labelled by adults. I forget who said it (maybe Madeleine L’Engle?) but whoever it was wrote for children when the writing was too much/too hard for adults.
Sally says
Yes Kay, I love that L’Engle quote too. And it’s so true.
Janice Scully says
I appreciate the insights into what is children’s poetry, the importance of being a child if you can when writing. Yes, more poems like yours need to address the pain of refugee children, to “tell the world you’re there.” Thank you for sharing yours.
Sally says
Thanks Janice. Yes we need to keep amplifying the voices of those who are not being heard (or seen!)
Carol Varsalona says
Your poem speaks volumes of plight (in no-man’s land) and hope (in hopes one day that you will be free). Thanks for sharing your poetic week, Sally.
Sally says
Thanks Carol – and thanks for dropping by.
Rebecca Newman says
Such a sad and wonderful poem about such an awful situation. Thanks for being my poetry co-presenter on Wednesday, and for all your insight and support leading up to it.
Sally says
You are very welcome. Always happy to chat with you – whether we have an audience or not!
Mary murphy says
Love it.
Sally says
Thanks Mary 🙂
Linda Mitchell says
oooooh, I do love a good discussion of definition that includes the word continuum. Seriously, I love that kind of talk. Your week sounds wonderful and full. I’ve not been to a poetry night. Someday, I need to do that! Yes, we need poems! Thank you for your song. Sometimes, it feels like no one is listening to the scary music.
Sally says
Sometimes it does feel that way. And sometimes there are glimmers of hope.
Linda Baie says
I, too, would have loved to have heard your talk, Sally, but enjoyed that you shared much of it today, too. Sometimes when I shared or students shared when I taught, what they loved depended on their lives at the moment, whether a rough day or a happy one. They were middle schoolers after all, tumbling up and down the growing up. We just had more terrible news of the treatment of the kids in our own refugee camps, so your poem, I agree, touches very much on the outrage I wish more felt. Thanks, & wishes sailing over for a nice weekend!
Sally says
Thank you Linda. Australia has spent over 4.5 million dollars to try to deport one family of four – with two children born here in Australia. They are currently locked up in a detention center on a remote island awaiting their appeal. The town they lived in wants them to stay here.Right minded Australians want them to stay. Our cruel government wants to point score by treating them inhumanely.
Kathryn Apel says
A poetry week does sound like a wonderful thing. I would have loved to been a fly on the wall (or a butt in a seat!) for your conversation with Bec. I’m sure it would have been warm and friendly and fun! Your song is beautiful. There is that saying, you catch more flies with honey than vinegar. This would be an example of honey. It speaks beautifully to kids – and adults.
Sally says
Thanks Kath. I do love honey!